Post by kitty on Mar 26, 2007 0:09:26 GMT -5
Here's an Idea that has been floating in my head for the longest time, but I was unable to put it on paper. *exhales* Here it goes.
Long ago before everything was separated into 3 different places (Heaven, Hell, and the Human world), Humans, Devils, and Angels lived in harmony. When one of the races fell, the other two came to help him or her up. Everything seemed perfect. There were 3 rulers that ruled them all. Syuri an angel, Garret a human, and Chihaku a devil. They did everything to make the world a great place. Syuri and Chihaku, despite their difference, were even married. One day, a problem had shot up about a human killing many people. This had never happened to them before and they all had their own opinions about it. Syuri wanted to let the human to be put the death. Garret wanted the human to live, "He wouldn't do it again. he knows it's bad." Chihaku wanted to have the human's family killed in front of him, so he'd know the pain of having a love one die. They argued for months about this issue which allowed the human to escape. No one was ever to found out about his where abouts. The three of them blamed each other and their differences became a concern among them. Unknown to the other two, Chihaku began making an army full of devils. No one in the army said a thing to the other races, for death would come to them. Chihaku was silent about the issue of the murder and took sides with the angel on the issue. Angels were as powerful as his devils, and being on Syuri's side would benefit him. This caused Garret to rebel against them. He did also prepare an army. It wasn't long until Chihaku's army had been completed and the other races were attacked. Chihaku let his army kill anyone, man, woman, or even child. He didn't care. Syuri and Garret were furious. The attacked Chihaku's army head on. It was a bloody and long war. The rivers were overflowed with blood and no one stopped killing. Years later the war was to come to an end. The devils were cornered by the numerous humans and angels who threatened with their weapons. Syuri and Garret went to Chihaku and told him to surrender, but he declined. This caused him his death and the full separation of the three races.
It was said that the former ruler of the devil was to come again and take revenge on the angels and humans, killing them once again. At the birth of a set of twins, this rumor was concluded true. The first one to be born was a boy, Kame. When his mother first laid eyes on him she stared down in shock. His eyes were full open and the pupil of his eye was an upside down cross. The doctor had warned the mother that he would be a devilish child. The pupil was a sign of a devil spirit. The mother assured them that he would grow to be a gentleman. The appearance wouldn't matter. The second of twin was a girl, Saki. She was one of the most beautiful baby anyone had seen. Unlike her brother, she didn't have anything abnormal happen as a new born. The mother was overjoyed at the sight of her two new children. Once the father had looked at them, he too, was happy.
As the children grew, they twins oddly became VERY close to each other and misfortune came upon the family. They became very poor and unhappy, but the family seemed happy. Being made fun of at school because of his eye, Kame had become a distant child. He started to avoid his parents and the children from school. He also started killing and torturing small animals. The only person that would be able to come near him as his sister, Saki. Unlike her brother, she grew up to be the perfect child. She had manners, she respected and cared for everybody, and she helped everyone happily.
On the children had reached their teen years, Kame had killed his father. This drove his mother crazy. She became depressed and distant from her children. Not even Saki was able to make her smile. Their mother became abusive to wards Kame. She stopped calling him by his name but by devil instead. She had often told him that she wished she listened to the doctor and got rid of him once he was born. Saki could do no hing but watch and try and convince her brother that their mother still loved him. Days later when their mother had hit Kame angrily, Kame attacked. He was tired of it. Saki watched in horror as her brother killed her mom.
Both of them were taken in by a priest after finding them living on the streets. He quickly noticed Kame's eye and locked him up in the basement of the temple. Chihaku was reincarnated in this one. He'd kill everyone. Everyday a dagger that had been dipped in holy water would cut his eye from the bottom of his brow and down to his cheek, to make the upside down cross pupil an upright one. The priest believed that this would purify the child. Saki was put into the church choir. She was treated as royalty. Her voice outdid all the women in the choir. It left everyone a pleasant image even though she wasn't happy. The priest thought of her as Syuri, the late ruler of all angels. She saw her brother once in a while and every time she did, he was hurt. He had soon lost sight in his eye and this made her angry. They had to get out of there. She had made a plan with her brother. If he had found away to escape the basement, she'd run away with him. Kame had killed the men who were trying to "purify" him and escaped with his sister.
They were out to find a safe place to live and the answer to why their life was like this.
After running away they would meet up with 3 devils: Yuskah, Derik, and Suwachin. These 3 devils had come to unleash Chihaku from Kame's body. They wanted revenge for the many deaths caused by the other races.
I kinda went blanket to what would happen after this.. I need help with this.. ^_^;;; Now continuing to the next part.. passed what will happen in the middle..
Saki is later captured and Kame is out to get her. He begins doing tasks for the 3 devils in order to get his sister back. The tasks that are done are torturing and killing people. This would help unleash him. It was successful. He was tired of doing what the devils told him to and never getting to even see his sister. He rebelled. he began killing everyone in his way to get the three of them. The 3 took him out into the world and unleashed him out to the people. Thousands of humans were killed and this made them happy. Angels began appearing on the world to fight against this killing machine but failed. One by one the three devils were defeated and Kame was still killing everyone.
Saki was released once the last of the 3 were defeated and she ran straight to him. Placing her hand on his shoulder from behind, she was about to tell him that she was back, he had turned and drove his hand into her stomach and out her back. Seeing that it was her, he was shocked and suddenly sad. He pulled back his hand after his sister begged him to stop killing and that maybe he was a devil like their mother had said...
This is where I stop ^_^;; Nothing else comes to mind. I have writers block..
From what I have so far, how is it? Kinda.. dark huh? ^_^;; *welcome to the mind of Kitty*
--I'll post the character bios ((The one's I have)) a little later *Ish a little lazy*--
The story was to be gothic looking in a way. If this whole thing was to be colored, it would be mainly dark or pastel like? Not many bright colors in it at all. The clothing and hair style would have a goth touch to it. Is there anyone on here that is good at that? I haven't been able to add goth style to the way I draw much. I'm working on it by watching Angel Sanctuary, but I haven't really got the technique yet ^_^;;.
Long ago before everything was separated into 3 different places (Heaven, Hell, and the Human world), Humans, Devils, and Angels lived in harmony. When one of the races fell, the other two came to help him or her up. Everything seemed perfect. There were 3 rulers that ruled them all. Syuri an angel, Garret a human, and Chihaku a devil. They did everything to make the world a great place. Syuri and Chihaku, despite their difference, were even married. One day, a problem had shot up about a human killing many people. This had never happened to them before and they all had their own opinions about it. Syuri wanted to let the human to be put the death. Garret wanted the human to live, "He wouldn't do it again. he knows it's bad." Chihaku wanted to have the human's family killed in front of him, so he'd know the pain of having a love one die. They argued for months about this issue which allowed the human to escape. No one was ever to found out about his where abouts. The three of them blamed each other and their differences became a concern among them. Unknown to the other two, Chihaku began making an army full of devils. No one in the army said a thing to the other races, for death would come to them. Chihaku was silent about the issue of the murder and took sides with the angel on the issue. Angels were as powerful as his devils, and being on Syuri's side would benefit him. This caused Garret to rebel against them. He did also prepare an army. It wasn't long until Chihaku's army had been completed and the other races were attacked. Chihaku let his army kill anyone, man, woman, or even child. He didn't care. Syuri and Garret were furious. The attacked Chihaku's army head on. It was a bloody and long war. The rivers were overflowed with blood and no one stopped killing. Years later the war was to come to an end. The devils were cornered by the numerous humans and angels who threatened with their weapons. Syuri and Garret went to Chihaku and told him to surrender, but he declined. This caused him his death and the full separation of the three races.
It was said that the former ruler of the devil was to come again and take revenge on the angels and humans, killing them once again. At the birth of a set of twins, this rumor was concluded true. The first one to be born was a boy, Kame. When his mother first laid eyes on him she stared down in shock. His eyes were full open and the pupil of his eye was an upside down cross. The doctor had warned the mother that he would be a devilish child. The pupil was a sign of a devil spirit. The mother assured them that he would grow to be a gentleman. The appearance wouldn't matter. The second of twin was a girl, Saki. She was one of the most beautiful baby anyone had seen. Unlike her brother, she didn't have anything abnormal happen as a new born. The mother was overjoyed at the sight of her two new children. Once the father had looked at them, he too, was happy.
As the children grew, they twins oddly became VERY close to each other and misfortune came upon the family. They became very poor and unhappy, but the family seemed happy. Being made fun of at school because of his eye, Kame had become a distant child. He started to avoid his parents and the children from school. He also started killing and torturing small animals. The only person that would be able to come near him as his sister, Saki. Unlike her brother, she grew up to be the perfect child. She had manners, she respected and cared for everybody, and she helped everyone happily.
On the children had reached their teen years, Kame had killed his father. This drove his mother crazy. She became depressed and distant from her children. Not even Saki was able to make her smile. Their mother became abusive to wards Kame. She stopped calling him by his name but by devil instead. She had often told him that she wished she listened to the doctor and got rid of him once he was born. Saki could do no hing but watch and try and convince her brother that their mother still loved him. Days later when their mother had hit Kame angrily, Kame attacked. He was tired of it. Saki watched in horror as her brother killed her mom.
Both of them were taken in by a priest after finding them living on the streets. He quickly noticed Kame's eye and locked him up in the basement of the temple. Chihaku was reincarnated in this one. He'd kill everyone. Everyday a dagger that had been dipped in holy water would cut his eye from the bottom of his brow and down to his cheek, to make the upside down cross pupil an upright one. The priest believed that this would purify the child. Saki was put into the church choir. She was treated as royalty. Her voice outdid all the women in the choir. It left everyone a pleasant image even though she wasn't happy. The priest thought of her as Syuri, the late ruler of all angels. She saw her brother once in a while and every time she did, he was hurt. He had soon lost sight in his eye and this made her angry. They had to get out of there. She had made a plan with her brother. If he had found away to escape the basement, she'd run away with him. Kame had killed the men who were trying to "purify" him and escaped with his sister.
They were out to find a safe place to live and the answer to why their life was like this.
After running away they would meet up with 3 devils: Yuskah, Derik, and Suwachin. These 3 devils had come to unleash Chihaku from Kame's body. They wanted revenge for the many deaths caused by the other races.
I kinda went blanket to what would happen after this.. I need help with this.. ^_^;;; Now continuing to the next part.. passed what will happen in the middle..
Saki is later captured and Kame is out to get her. He begins doing tasks for the 3 devils in order to get his sister back. The tasks that are done are torturing and killing people. This would help unleash him. It was successful. He was tired of doing what the devils told him to and never getting to even see his sister. He rebelled. he began killing everyone in his way to get the three of them. The 3 took him out into the world and unleashed him out to the people. Thousands of humans were killed and this made them happy. Angels began appearing on the world to fight against this killing machine but failed. One by one the three devils were defeated and Kame was still killing everyone.
Saki was released once the last of the 3 were defeated and she ran straight to him. Placing her hand on his shoulder from behind, she was about to tell him that she was back, he had turned and drove his hand into her stomach and out her back. Seeing that it was her, he was shocked and suddenly sad. He pulled back his hand after his sister begged him to stop killing and that maybe he was a devil like their mother had said...
This is where I stop ^_^;; Nothing else comes to mind. I have writers block..
From what I have so far, how is it? Kinda.. dark huh? ^_^;; *welcome to the mind of Kitty*
--I'll post the character bios ((The one's I have)) a little later *Ish a little lazy*--
The story was to be gothic looking in a way. If this whole thing was to be colored, it would be mainly dark or pastel like? Not many bright colors in it at all. The clothing and hair style would have a goth touch to it. Is there anyone on here that is good at that? I haven't been able to add goth style to the way I draw much. I'm working on it by watching Angel Sanctuary, but I haven't really got the technique yet ^_^;;.