Post by kitty on Mar 31, 2007 16:07:46 GMT -5
Here's another Idea. It's long, but please read and comment!
Luke was born a trouble maker. He's been getting into trouble through out his life and had always faced the consiquence. One day he had gotten into more than he could handle. At the age of 24, Luke had killed many men. Most would call him a rebel, for it was only the governments men that had their lives in this young man's hands. Luke distasted the government. The way the controlled the country by assigning roles to everyone as soon as they were born, bothered him. If anyone had said otherwise, they'd be sent to jail. It wasn't long until the government had suspected him of the murders. When asked to be questioned, Luke booked it. He ran as he was chased by a couple of agents ((You know, those guys that wear all black and have the sunglasses on? Body guards?)).
A little ways from where Luke was heading, a young school girl was window shopping. She had been looking at the little animals at the shop window. They were so cute ^//^. A few moments later Luke had ran into her making them both fall to the ground. A crowd of people looked to them wandering if they were okay, or why this man sudently was on her. As the two got back on their feet the girl had gotten a glimps of the two men dressed in black. Luke had also noticed they both began to go away. The government wouldn't do anything when there were many witnesses. He apologized to the school girl nd was about to leave before she had told him to stop. She told him that she noticed those two men and that she had practically saved him. He seemed annoyed at this. Since she had "saved him" then he must do something for. If he didn't, she'd find those men and tell them where he was. She even flashed his id card that she had picked up when he had ran into her. He had no choice. She was a kid anyway, did she want him to buy her icecream or something. He was wrong. She had reached out from her bag and reached up to his neck from behind him saying that he had to do one thing no matter what it was. Because of her doing this, Luke had a different idea of what she wanted and wasn't going to complain. CLICK.
Luke had a collar around his neck and he was to be the girl's dog for a year.
He soon had to live with her (She lived alone) and she quickly began to teach him dog obideince. Whever he didn't do as she said, she'd sqirt him with water. He would now eat on the floor and sleep at the foot of her bed. She treated him exactly like a dog. Whenever he tried to run away she find him and pull out her cell and pretend to call the police. If they ever went out together, she'd leash him. "Your not trained to stay by my side yet," she'd say. Luke was miserable.
As Luke was being treated like a dog, the government had kept their eye on him. They couldn't get him when the girl was around him. Files on this girl had shown that she was completely loyal to the government and they didn't want to break that loyalty. When Cadence, the girl
, had gotten Luke to wait for her by her school when it was time for her to go home, one of the agents had attacked Luke. They had ran to a near by ally to fight, so their wouldn't be an uproar. It ended with Luke grabbing the agent's gun and killing him. Cadence had gotten out of school ad was greeted by a blood stained Luke. She quickly to him home and fixed him up. He had been shot in the arm. She let him sleep on the couch so he could be comfertable.
The government had sent a few others in the same month after him but each one ended up dead. Luke was injured many times but covered them up from Cadence. He had grown a little close to her after she had nursed him after the first fight anc he didn't want her to worry. Everything seemed calm for a while and there weren't any other "visitors". Spring break was coming up and Candence was arranging a vacation for her, Luke, and a couple of her friends. This became suscessful and they went to a hotel with hotsprings. It was perfect, except for Luke. He was a "dog and dogs weren't allowed in the water so he had to sit by the springs. Cadence had told him to make sure guys wouldn't come and take a peak at her and her friends.
During this break, he had learned by Cadence's friends, that she didn't really have any friends and that she was living alone because she had family issues. It seemed that Cadence was raped by her mothers boyfriend and when she told her mom, her mom had kicked her out of the house sayig that it was Cadence's fault that her boyfriend would do any of that. She had said Cadence was a who*e (just incase I can't put that there ^_^;; )). She had moved in with her friends until she was able to afford living on her own. Cadence seemed much more happy now than she was before Luke had moved in.
This had made Luke sorry for Cadence and grow a little closer to her. He didn't want her to get hurt anymore. Even though he was completely annoied with her.
abotu a month after the spring break, the two had gotten into a large fight. At school, Cadence was asked out and she agreed o it. This angred Luke and he had said that as long as he was her dog, then she could't go out with her school mate. She had tole him that he wasn't her dog anymore and ripped off his collar. He stormed off saying that he was glad and hated living with her. Luke had no where to go and Cadence was left crying. She had gone to her date the next day. Luke was very angried as he walked the streets just thinking about how she was now going out with some boy. He soon ran into one of her friends who was out of breath. She told him that she had been looking for him and that she had found a note at Cadence's home. It had said that she was kidnapped ((The school boy was an under cover agent). He instantly headed for the main government He faught the agents greeting him at every level of the building until he had reached the top where Cadence was injured greatly and tied up behind the head agaent of the government. It was a long fight that had injured Luke greatly and had killed the main agent. He freed Cadence before they headed for home a man walked out from a side door and said that they won't stop until they've got him. Luke had replied by saying, "We'll be ready."
The End?
Luke was born a trouble maker. He's been getting into trouble through out his life and had always faced the consiquence. One day he had gotten into more than he could handle. At the age of 24, Luke had killed many men. Most would call him a rebel, for it was only the governments men that had their lives in this young man's hands. Luke distasted the government. The way the controlled the country by assigning roles to everyone as soon as they were born, bothered him. If anyone had said otherwise, they'd be sent to jail. It wasn't long until the government had suspected him of the murders. When asked to be questioned, Luke booked it. He ran as he was chased by a couple of agents ((You know, those guys that wear all black and have the sunglasses on? Body guards?)).
A little ways from where Luke was heading, a young school girl was window shopping. She had been looking at the little animals at the shop window. They were so cute ^//^. A few moments later Luke had ran into her making them both fall to the ground. A crowd of people looked to them wandering if they were okay, or why this man sudently was on her. As the two got back on their feet the girl had gotten a glimps of the two men dressed in black. Luke had also noticed they both began to go away. The government wouldn't do anything when there were many witnesses. He apologized to the school girl nd was about to leave before she had told him to stop. She told him that she noticed those two men and that she had practically saved him. He seemed annoyed at this. Since she had "saved him" then he must do something for. If he didn't, she'd find those men and tell them where he was. She even flashed his id card that she had picked up when he had ran into her. He had no choice. She was a kid anyway, did she want him to buy her icecream or something. He was wrong. She had reached out from her bag and reached up to his neck from behind him saying that he had to do one thing no matter what it was. Because of her doing this, Luke had a different idea of what she wanted and wasn't going to complain. CLICK.
Luke had a collar around his neck and he was to be the girl's dog for a year.
He soon had to live with her (She lived alone) and she quickly began to teach him dog obideince. Whever he didn't do as she said, she'd sqirt him with water. He would now eat on the floor and sleep at the foot of her bed. She treated him exactly like a dog. Whenever he tried to run away she find him and pull out her cell and pretend to call the police. If they ever went out together, she'd leash him. "Your not trained to stay by my side yet," she'd say. Luke was miserable.
As Luke was being treated like a dog, the government had kept their eye on him. They couldn't get him when the girl was around him. Files on this girl had shown that she was completely loyal to the government and they didn't want to break that loyalty. When Cadence, the girl
, had gotten Luke to wait for her by her school when it was time for her to go home, one of the agents had attacked Luke. They had ran to a near by ally to fight, so their wouldn't be an uproar. It ended with Luke grabbing the agent's gun and killing him. Cadence had gotten out of school ad was greeted by a blood stained Luke. She quickly to him home and fixed him up. He had been shot in the arm. She let him sleep on the couch so he could be comfertable. The government had sent a few others in the same month after him but each one ended up dead. Luke was injured many times but covered them up from Cadence. He had grown a little close to her after she had nursed him after the first fight anc he didn't want her to worry. Everything seemed calm for a while and there weren't any other "visitors". Spring break was coming up and Candence was arranging a vacation for her, Luke, and a couple of her friends. This became suscessful and they went to a hotel with hotsprings. It was perfect, except for Luke. He was a "dog and dogs weren't allowed in the water so he had to sit by the springs. Cadence had told him to make sure guys wouldn't come and take a peak at her and her friends.
During this break, he had learned by Cadence's friends, that she didn't really have any friends and that she was living alone because she had family issues. It seemed that Cadence was raped by her mothers boyfriend and when she told her mom, her mom had kicked her out of the house sayig that it was Cadence's fault that her boyfriend would do any of that. She had said Cadence was a who*e (just incase I can't put that there ^_^;; )). She had moved in with her friends until she was able to afford living on her own. Cadence seemed much more happy now than she was before Luke had moved in.
This had made Luke sorry for Cadence and grow a little closer to her. He didn't want her to get hurt anymore. Even though he was completely annoied with her.
abotu a month after the spring break, the two had gotten into a large fight. At school, Cadence was asked out and she agreed o it. This angred Luke and he had said that as long as he was her dog, then she could't go out with her school mate. She had tole him that he wasn't her dog anymore and ripped off his collar. He stormed off saying that he was glad and hated living with her. Luke had no where to go and Cadence was left crying. She had gone to her date the next day. Luke was very angried as he walked the streets just thinking about how she was now going out with some boy. He soon ran into one of her friends who was out of breath. She told him that she had been looking for him and that she had found a note at Cadence's home. It had said that she was kidnapped ((The school boy was an under cover agent). He instantly headed for the main government He faught the agents greeting him at every level of the building until he had reached the top where Cadence was injured greatly and tied up behind the head agaent of the government. It was a long fight that had injured Luke greatly and had killed the main agent. He freed Cadence before they headed for home a man walked out from a side door and said that they won't stop until they've got him. Luke had replied by saying, "We'll be ready."
The End?
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