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Post by Sophie on Mar 24, 2007 13:13:32 GMT -5
Mmmkay, for this project I'm looking towards a comic...
So, the story goes something like this: Eva is the sister and Stephen is the brother (Stephen us younger than Eva). They move to London and in their new house they're looking around and they find a trap door in the basement, but when they go get their mom and try to show her, the door isn't there anymore. Creepy right? So that night at like midnight or something, Stephen goes to see if it's there and it is, so he wakes up Eva and they go in, turns out it's a whole other world and the humans who go there are the ones who must defend the people of the world against an evil sorcerer (havent deceided a name, any ideas?).
So, that's all I have, comments and critique would be appreciated.
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sakuto
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Post by sakuto on Mar 24, 2007 16:04:58 GMT -5
it reminds me of the Chronicles of Narnia...especially if it's in London...
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Post by Sophie on Mar 24, 2007 16:30:02 GMT -5
I suppose, but the world is in a desert-like area...
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Post by Gwen on Mar 24, 2007 16:39:59 GMT -5
Sounds interesting so far. Could we have more info? It will be easier to judge if there's more to see.
((Also, could you go check out the Gods of Melinon? Not that I'm shamelessly plugging or anything...))
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Post by Sophie on Mar 24, 2007 16:58:13 GMT -5
Eh, I dont really have any more to it. ^^; I'll come up with more tonight. And yes, I can check it out and I'll create a discussion topic for it to organize the launch date and stuff.
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Post by misaokat on Mar 24, 2007 17:23:46 GMT -5
hhhmmmm.... it's this part the worries meh "turns out it's a whole other world and the humans who go there are the ones who must defend the people of the world against an evil sorcerer"
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Post by Sophie on Mar 24, 2007 17:35:10 GMT -5
Well, see, i am not the best at being creative. xD I just take parts from other books and mash them together...I should really rethink this.
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Post by Zukoh on Mar 25, 2007 11:12:10 GMT -5
I really like this idea. Sure, there are a few angles needing ironed out (personally I'm not too fond of the evil sorceror) but I think the rest of it is pretty good~! I especially like the thought of them living in some bleak normal world and then heading off to a magical fantasy world.
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Post by mangafandom on Mar 28, 2007 22:57:36 GMT -5
yeah it sounds like a good idea, but with a little more in-depth information it could become awsome. like, why are the humans the only ones that can save the world? are there renegades in the other world that assist them? why is the evil sorceror 'evil'? who ate the cookie from the cookie jar?
o.0; - last question may be ignored lol...
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