Post by rasuel on Mar 24, 2007 20:16:07 GMT -5
The title sucks for the most part, and I am very prone to change it. Anyways, on to the summary! (Liph is pronounced like life)
Summary(more detailed): This story takes place in a world called Liph and starts of in the capital city of Ralvon East. The main character, Grandel, is a 16-year-old bounty hunter who is a human/demon hybrid who has never known his real parents. The only clue that he has is the blade that he has had since he can remember. One day, he unfortunately saves a bandit, Lily, who eventually black mails him into being her personal bodyguard. Through their adventures, they will encounters friends (companions in Grandel's case), such as a perverted ADD case sorcerer Loki, and a little girl, Carol, who has a teddy bear that is possessed by a Weasel demon who is now called Lara (who is a guy, blame Carol for the bad name choose). And they will slowly start to unfold events from their pasts that will shape the entire world of Liph. (no too original of an idea)
Characters(basic for the most part):
Grandel: Main character, a bit cold and distant, but has some kindness in him. A master swordsmen who can use the two mysterious new elements, Dark Fire and Dark Ice. He also loves appels and fruits since he can't eat meat (he goes demonic if he does).
Lily(Lily the Bandit): The bandit that Grandel saves and then serves. She always cares a small pendent that has small angel wings. Her past is a bit shady, but she's all around a good person who just has a not too respectable occupation. Her weapon of choose is the Jo staff.
Loki: The perverted hyper active nut job of the story. At a young age, he ran away from home so he could fell his need to feel useful. A shadowling, Vow, who fallows Loki around everywhere, has been his best friend since childhood. Vow is more for moral support then combat(since he can't fight). Loki isn't into weapons, he uses his shadow spells to fight, and for a last resort, he goes into an uncontrolable state where he is protected by something called "Pycho Armor".
Carol: A young girl who was resently orphaned(parents were murdered). She found a bet up teddy bear, who she now calls Lara, and befriended it. Lara, on the other hand, hates the name since he is a guy, and because he is a Weasal Demon who is bound to the teddy bear's body. Despite Lara's yelling, he does protect Carol from danger.
Flint: Grandel's somewhat foster father. He looked after and taght him the ways of the sword until he was 10, then since he thought he learned enough to be safe, kicked him out onto the street (tipakel). They still keep in touch when Grandel comes to buy some appels. He was once a great bounty hunter named "Twin Katanas".
Ursa: Nothing much at all is known about him, only that he is a very powerful demon.
Celestials: These guys come much later in the story. They are basicaly the gaurdians of Liph, there is one for each element.
C&C please
Summary(more detailed): This story takes place in a world called Liph and starts of in the capital city of Ralvon East. The main character, Grandel, is a 16-year-old bounty hunter who is a human/demon hybrid who has never known his real parents. The only clue that he has is the blade that he has had since he can remember. One day, he unfortunately saves a bandit, Lily, who eventually black mails him into being her personal bodyguard. Through their adventures, they will encounters friends (companions in Grandel's case), such as a perverted ADD case sorcerer Loki, and a little girl, Carol, who has a teddy bear that is possessed by a Weasel demon who is now called Lara (who is a guy, blame Carol for the bad name choose). And they will slowly start to unfold events from their pasts that will shape the entire world of Liph. (no too original of an idea)
Characters(basic for the most part):
Grandel: Main character, a bit cold and distant, but has some kindness in him. A master swordsmen who can use the two mysterious new elements, Dark Fire and Dark Ice. He also loves appels and fruits since he can't eat meat (he goes demonic if he does).
Lily(Lily the Bandit): The bandit that Grandel saves and then serves. She always cares a small pendent that has small angel wings. Her past is a bit shady, but she's all around a good person who just has a not too respectable occupation. Her weapon of choose is the Jo staff.
Loki: The perverted hyper active nut job of the story. At a young age, he ran away from home so he could fell his need to feel useful. A shadowling, Vow, who fallows Loki around everywhere, has been his best friend since childhood. Vow is more for moral support then combat(since he can't fight). Loki isn't into weapons, he uses his shadow spells to fight, and for a last resort, he goes into an uncontrolable state where he is protected by something called "Pycho Armor".
Carol: A young girl who was resently orphaned(parents were murdered). She found a bet up teddy bear, who she now calls Lara, and befriended it. Lara, on the other hand, hates the name since he is a guy, and because he is a Weasal Demon who is bound to the teddy bear's body. Despite Lara's yelling, he does protect Carol from danger.
Flint: Grandel's somewhat foster father. He looked after and taght him the ways of the sword until he was 10, then since he thought he learned enough to be safe, kicked him out onto the street (tipakel). They still keep in touch when Grandel comes to buy some appels. He was once a great bounty hunter named "Twin Katanas".
Ursa: Nothing much at all is known about him, only that he is a very powerful demon.
Celestials: These guys come much later in the story. They are basicaly the gaurdians of Liph, there is one for each element.
C&C please