Twlight - Possible Manga Plot

[uzy]

The name is pending because I can't think of anything at the moment and I may need to leave soon, which I want to finish this post first.. ^^;

Here it goes:
I wasn't really sure what was happening until it happened... A day when I finally understood that the 'prefect' world my parents told me about didn't exist; everything my parents told me was a lie. I simply watched the dragoons wipe out my people. The moment that I'd trained for, and I had failed. I swore I'd protect my family and the village, but it turns out it was a dream that never could've happened... It was a dream that was impossible to catch, just like twilight.

Ayrai Bloodtry was a normal child growing up in a small village until everyone she held close died in front of her eyes. She running through the bloody remains of her past, she remembered everything she'd been through. It turned out that fables of the perfect world were just lies to keep her with the village, as if it held a secret... As if no one was who they said they were...

Now, several years later, she's back to find out the secrets; No matter who gets in her way or how...
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I'm sorry if that didn't make sense, so feel free to ask questions.

Characters in the next post

[uzy]

Characters

Ayrai Bloodtry;;
Current Age; 14
Current Height; 5'6
Race; Human
Appearance; Her skin is slightly tanned and her hair is a deep purple that is always in a terra-twist. She wears baggy black jeans, a baggy black vest and something of a blue t-shirt under. Her shoes are steel-toed and steel plated on the outside sole. She has dark blue eyes.
Ref;; ((Will find one later))

Uzy;;
Current Age; 27
Current Height; 6'0
Race; Dragoon (Half-human/Half-dragon)
Appearance; Wears a silver cross collar, fairly tight brown jeans, a black shirt and a dark blue undershirt. He has a marking under his right eye, which looks like three lines and, in order from right to left, an arrow, a square and a circle. He also has a flame-like tattoo on his right thigh. He's got bright yellow eyes.
Ref; Currently, my D/P on these forums

Su Repa;;
Current Age; 17
Current Height; 5'8
Race; Halfling (Half-Fae/Half-demon)
Appearance; Messy sky blue hair with sky blue eyes to match. She wears tube tops and baggy jeans.
Ref; ((Will get one soon))

Tokani Injiiny;;
Current Age; 14
Current Height; 5'7
Race; Human
Appearance; He's got 'face' tattoos in a royal-like blue color and silver eyes. His hair is white and streaked red randomly. He wears tight and baggy pants and many different shirts.
Ref; ((Will post one soon))

IceFire;;
Current Age; 12
Current Height; 5'1
Race; Demon
Appearance;; He's got short horns (7 inches) pointing/leaning to the back of his head. He wears all kinds of kids’ clothes. He's got a middle type blue for the inside of his hair and then spreads out to be a dark-ish red.
Ref; ((Will post one soon))

Zacka Bii;;
Current Age; 19
Current Height; 5'11
Race; Human
Appearance; Messy spiked blonde hair and dark green eyes. He wears shirts that cut off before his muscles (Barely pass his top abs) with lots of funny perverted phrases on them. He wears shorts mostly.

I'll add more character designs later.
I just realized that my characters eyes are very random eye colors ^^;

Edit;; I’ve edited it on Microsoft word, so there shouldn’t be any grammar/spelling mistakes.

[mangafandom]

[glow=purple,2,200] sounds good! but i think your grammer needs a bit of revising..[/glow]

[uzy]

Really? My bad... >.<

[sakuto]

interesting, but not much to work off of...

[uzy]

Heheh... I could post a basic plot for the first few pages/chapters if enough people like it <33