Post by Princess Shaman on May 19, 2007 12:32:46 GMT -5
Okay, when I said "very new idea", I meant that it just came to me a little while ago, so I don't have the details down. It's about an android, name Ameretat who was created by a man name Vincent. In the past, Vincent's very close female friend, Serenity, died, but he couldn't get over that. So instead, he uses the lab and some money from his father's big company [not sure what company it would be yet] to create an android to take her place. Only later, he learns that Ameretat could never be Serenity even though she tries so hard to keep who she calls her master happy.
I don't really have the plot fully down, but I did write out Ameretat's point of view. Tell me what you think and, if it's a really good idea, I could start to lay out the plot and all.
I don't really have the plot fully down, but I did write out Ameretat's point of view. Tell me what you think and, if it's a really good idea, I could start to lay out the plot and all.
My name is Serenity or that is the name of the girl I was created to replace after her death. So please, don’t let my young appearance distract you. My real name is Ameretat, meaning immortality. I am an android with a purpose to make my master, Vincent, happy. He was the one who wanted to create me for this one single purpose: to take the place of his best friend and I will do anything to make that wish come true. I must. For him.
My first memory was me sealed in a tube of a mysterious liquid that surrounded my body. Wired were attached all over my body. Computers surrounded the tube. I had no memories. I was like a newborn child opening her eyes for the first time. And like a baby, my vision was unclear. A voice stood out to me, though he didn’t talk directly.
“Ameretat has awoken. Out hard work will finally bring results. Serenity is born again.”
Immediately, I knew who owned that voice.
"Master…?”
That was then. A time when I didn’t know who I was, and this is now. I live to fulfill Vince’s wish with all that I can because he is that important to me. I’ll be everything Serenity was if it makes my master happy. But what if I can’t? How can you truly make someone happy by being someone you’re not?
No, I am who I am. I am Serenity and that’s what Vince wants. So... so why do I feel so cold and down when I am not like Serenity at all? What do humans call this feeling? It doesn’t matter to me. I am not human at all. I am an android programmed to show my master Serenity not Ameretat. Ameretat means nothing to him… right?
My first memory was me sealed in a tube of a mysterious liquid that surrounded my body. Wired were attached all over my body. Computers surrounded the tube. I had no memories. I was like a newborn child opening her eyes for the first time. And like a baby, my vision was unclear. A voice stood out to me, though he didn’t talk directly.
“Ameretat has awoken. Out hard work will finally bring results. Serenity is born again.”
Immediately, I knew who owned that voice.
"Master…?”
That was then. A time when I didn’t know who I was, and this is now. I live to fulfill Vince’s wish with all that I can because he is that important to me. I’ll be everything Serenity was if it makes my master happy. But what if I can’t? How can you truly make someone happy by being someone you’re not?
No, I am who I am. I am Serenity and that’s what Vince wants. So... so why do I feel so cold and down when I am not like Serenity at all? What do humans call this feeling? It doesn’t matter to me. I am not human at all. I am an android programmed to show my master Serenity not Ameretat. Ameretat means nothing to him… right?